英语**满分作文(端午节英语**满分作文)

前沿拓展：

英语**满分作文

　　 Olympics and I
　　Dear friend, I have a great news to inform here. Through long efforts, Beijing has been granted the right to host 2008 Olympic games. As a resident in Beijing, I feel quite excited and like to share with you my happiness. This success means a lot more than a game to me. In the first place, this Games will definitely promote the development of our economy. According to a recent survey by some experts, this games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. What‟s more, our culture will be widely recognized and accepted all over the world through the Games. People will come over from every corner of the world, and experience Chinese culture in every aspect. Besides, through the games, our living environment will be greatly improved. For example, the public transportation system will be up-dated. Moreover, it‟s known that more trees will be planted, and grassland will be considerably expanded. My friend, I really look forward to the coming of this great Games. As an individual, I‟m all ready to offer my help in any way I can. I also hope to invite you all to come here, and watch the games in 2008.
　　Sincerely yours,
　　奥运与我
　　亲爱的朋友，我有一个好消息，告知这里。通过长期的努力，北京已获得申办2008年奥运会。作为一个在北京居住，我感到很兴奋，你想分享我的快乐。 这一成功意味着很多超过我的游戏。第一，本届奥运会一定会促进我们的经济发展。据一些专家最近的一项调查，这项比赛将提高约3％的国内生产总值，提供职位约1.0万。更重要的是，我们的文化将得到广泛认可和接受世界各地通过奥运会。人们会走过来从世界的每一个角落，体验中华文化在各个方面。此外， 5 透过游戏，我们的生活环境将大大改善。例如，公共交通系统会过时。此外，据了解，将种植更多树木，草地将大大扩大。 我的朋友，我真的期待着这个伟大的奥运会的到来。作为个人，我都愿意提供我的任何方式我可以提供帮助。我也希望能邀请大家来到这里，观看2008年奥运会，此致。

　　Touri** in China
　　Recent years have seen a tendency in China that touri** is growing faster. According to a recent survey made by some experts, about 47% ** residents travel regularly, and 28% rural residents also make their tour across the country. The survey also shows that more people are interested in touri**, and will join the army in the future. Facing this tendency, we can‟t help exploring some underlying factors that are responsible. In the very first place, with the policy of reform and opening up, Chinese people‟s living standard has been greatly improved, and therefore, most of them can afford to travel around. What‟s more, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude to touri**, and regard it as a life style. In addition, touri** facilities are becoming better and better. For example, transportation develops fast, and many scenic spots are available now.
　　**旅游
　　最近几年，在**的趋势，旅游业增长较快。根据最近的一项调查显示一些专家认为，约47％城镇居民定期作出旅行，28％的农村居民，也使他们的全国巡演。该调查还显示，更多的人在旅游有兴趣，并会在将来加入军队。 面对这一趋势，我们不能不说是负责任的开发一些潜在因素。在第一个地方，随着改革开放政策，对****的生活水平有了很大提高，因此，他们大多数都不能周游。更重要的是，它相信，人们现在更积极的态度，旅游业，把它作为一种生活方式。此外，旅游设施正在变得越来越好。例如，交通运输发展迅速，许多景点都已经上市。
　　
　　What a disaster(灾难)!
　　So far,it's reported that more than 60,000 people died in the SiChuan earthquake.What's more, millions of people there have become homeless.And they are still in the danger of illness and other difficulties. Anyway, thanks to all the kind people, in and abroad,the situation has been changing well.But we still work hard at it,especially to build houses for those homeless people and cure the injured people. What can we do now? Besides doing our own job well,we can donate money to them.We firmly believe that with the party and the government's strong leadership, and with the people of all nationalities throughout the country to aid,this earthquake relief will be a victory!
　　什么是灾难（灾难）！
　　到目前为止，有报道称，超过60,000人在四川earthquake.What的**亡，再加上数百万**有成为homeless.And他们在疾病和其他困难的危险之中。无论如何，感谢所有善良的人们，在国内外形势已经改变well.But我们仍然在努力工作的，特别是为那些无家可归的人建造房屋和医治受伤群众。 现在我们可以做什么？除了做好自己的工作做好，我们可以捐钱给them.We坚信，有**和**的坚强领导，有全国各族**的援助国，这将是一个抗震救灾的胜利！
　　　　
　　The average family income in our Kangming City increased from 8,000 yuan per year in 1998 to 20,000 yuan in 2008. In the meantime, the structure of the average family expenses has changed, too. These graphs show the change clearly. The biggest part of the average family expenses is housing. In 1998, the average family spent 25 percent of its income on housing. In 2880, expenses on housing rose to 42 percent. Food and drink are the second biggest part of the average family expenses. In 1998, about 18% of the average income was spent on this item. In 2008, the figure grew to 30%. As a result of such increase in the expenses on housing and food, expenses on other items have been reduced from 57% in 1998 to 28%in 2008. Thus, a conclusion can be drawn that as income increases, people can improve their living step. But still the average family has to spend a large part of income to meet the basic needs.
　　在我们康明城市家庭平均收入从8000元，每年1998至2008年的20,000元。在此期间，平均家庭支出结构也发生了变化。这些图形显示了明显的变化。 而一般家庭开支的最大部分是住房。 1998年，平均每个家庭花费了其对房屋的收入百分之25。在2880，关于住房支出上升到百分之42。食品和饮料是平均家庭开支第二大的一部分。 1998年，大约18％的平均收入是用于这一项目。 2008年，这一数字增长到30％。由于在费用等增加住房和食物，结果在其他项目的费用已经减少到1998年的57％，至2008年的28％。 因此，可以得出一个结论，随着收入的增加，人们可以改善他们的生活步骤。但仍是一般家庭要花费很大一部分收入，以满足基本需要。

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下面是向学霸进军为进入高三的学生们整理的2020高三最后两个多月冲刺之历年**英语满分作文，以供参考。

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试题回顾

假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去**朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括：

1. 到达时间；

2. 合适的礼物；

3. 餐桌礼仪。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【思路点拨】

本文是一篇电子邮件类应用文写作。餐桌礼仪也是考生比较熟悉的话题。成文时注意以下几点：

一、内容要点要齐全：

1．到达时间；2．合适的礼物；3．餐桌礼仪。

二、时态：

主要用一般现在时和将来时；

三、人称：

第二、三人称。

四、注意使用恰当的高级词汇、短语或句型，以提高作文的水平；

五、适当使用一些连接词和插入语，使文章表达自然、流畅。

1. 浏览信息要点。

2. 三个任务点，第一段内容：问候对方，马上呈现对方所涉及的话题，拜访**家庭，做客时间的要求和忌讳! 第二段内容：做客拜访的合适礼物，可以适当延展，初次拜访，亲密朋友之间拜访，二次拜访，家庭情况适合的礼物，通用的礼物等。第三段：table manners,可以描述两三个通常的**人的餐桌礼节和忌讳的地方，有鲜明特色之处，最后一句表达祝愿。

3. 时态，给对方的建议和说明，用一般现在时，描述风俗礼仪这是客观规律性的东西，用一般现在时。

4. 头脑风暴短语、句型结构，开始打草稿。

5. 行文。

6. 检查拼写和语法。

【满分作文】

Dear Terry,

How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some a**ice.

Firstly, I would 1ike to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. Secondly, if I were you I would bring some appropriate gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. Besides, table manners are also what you should pay attention to. For example, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them on your dish is a **art choice.

If you have any other problems, please don’t hesitate to contact me.

【素材积累】

做客礼仪：

1. 预先约定一个时间以便对方事先作好安排。如果事先已经约定好了时间，就应遵守约定，准时到达，如需提早十分钟二十分钟之内可以接受，不要迟到，以免主人等候，也不要太早到，以免主人未作好准备。这是一个基本礼节问题。

2.如果有专属地域文化特色的礼物是最好的。如果朋友家有长辈，带点烟酒和茶叶或一些老人家用的保健品等；如果朋友家有小孩，带点儿童玩具或买箱牛奶，然后加点茶叶啥的；不要送钟、梨、伞等这些东西，被认为不吉祥。

3.主人会请客人入座上席，再请长辈入座客人旁。入座的时侯要从椅子的左边进入。在中餐结束时，筷子应整齐地放在靠碗右边的桌上，并应等客人们都放下筷子以后，主人示意离席后方可以离开，不能自己吃完了放下筷子就走，这样做是很没礼貌的表现。

常用词语和句子

准时：on time/punctually

餐桌礼仪：table manners

合适的、恰当的：appropriate

拜访：pay a visit to

You are supposed/expected/required to do…

It' s a good idea to…

It' s appropriate/suitable to do …

It' s sensible/reasonable/a**isable to do …

It' s good manners to do …

It' s noteworthy that…

I think it would be more helpful if you could do…

It would be wise of you to…

It' s desirable to do …

It' s inappropriate to do …

It' s impolite to do…

It' s unwise/ina**isable to do …

Never （助动词/系动词/情态动词）主语+谓语动词…

It' s not suitable for you to do…in such a situation.

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试题回顾

你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together，内容包括：

1. 短片内容：学校的发展；

2. 放映时间、地点；

3. 欢迎对短片提出意见。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【写作点拨】

英语书面通知的时态应该以一般将来时为主，多使用被动语态、简单句。在通知中不应当过度的使用较复杂的词语和读起来拗口的句子。

第二个注意点：层次一定要清晰，一个层次要表达一件事情，使人看起来一目了然。

【满分范文】

Notice

Boys and girls,

May I have your attention, please? Recently, an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus. Welcome to join us end enjoy it! Here are some relevant details about it.

To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing together, which is about the development of our beloved school; as a result, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, it will be in the library from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th . What’s more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.

Hopefully, you would make it to our activity. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.

The Student Union

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试题回顾

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括：

1. 学校的体育场馆；

2. 主要的运动项目；

3. 你喜欢的项目。

注意：

1. 词数100左右：

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【思路点拨】

本题作文为提纲式作文，形式依然是书信，即给英国朋友Peter介绍学校体育运动情况，属于学校生活话题。这一话题贴合学生生活的实际，学生并不陌生，有话可说。

第一可以介绍学校的体育场馆，场馆的位置，大小，开放时间等等。然后简要介绍学校主要开设的体育项目有哪些，可挑选一到两个做详细介绍，如学生的活动时间，活动形式，以及此类活动的好处等。再次简要分析自己喜欢的体育项目是什么，并简单分析喜欢的原因，自己从中得到的益处等。文章可主要采用一般现在时态，第一人称的方式来写。

【满分范文】

Dear Peter,

I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.

To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I’m intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.

All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.

Yours,

Li Hua

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试题回顾

第一节 应用文写作

假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：

1. 口语能力：

2. 相关经验；

3. 应聘目的。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【思路点拨】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写应聘信。

第一步：根据提示可知，学校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。要求写封应聘信，内容包括：1.口语能力：2.相关经验；3.应聘目的。

第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组）。

第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有**式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

【范文】

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.

I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. What's more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.

I' m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills. Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

试题回顾

第二节 读后续写（满分25分）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.

We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afermoon. Uncle Paul, my dad's friend, picked us up from the airport and drove me up to his farm in Pecos.

His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.

In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn't going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don't be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don't get lost!" “OK!" my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late aftermoon sunmixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven ( 编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

【思路点拨】

读后续写要求考生第一要读懂已有信息，不仅能读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络。续篇这篇短文时，考生要搞清楚故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置、人物思想情感的变化等。在此基础上，考生要顺着文章的思路，根据线索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用语言表达出来。

通过阅读所给文章可知，父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。

根据第一段所给首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.这一句是故事发展的转折点，可从rabbit出现后带来的反应扩展开，可以写**反应，也可以写人的反应，但要注意与第二段首句相呼应。第二段首句是We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.这一句呼应前文Uncle Paul的叮嘱——不要误吃晚饭，可从如何寻路返回农场去写。

续写时注意要使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后要用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

【满分范文】

Suddenly a lttle rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse turned to the 1eft to avoid the ittle rabbit as I held on tightly and tried not to fall. Then my dad turned around and shouted, Hoid on! All of a sudden the horse began to run My dad tried to keep up behind us. For a few minutes my horse slowed down to a trot and then stopped beside a river. I looked around and realized that we were way off the track.

We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Luckily the stars came out and gave us a little light when we were looking for the way to the farm house. After what must have been several hours, we suddenly heard the sound of sheep in the distance. My dad and I both rode our horses towards the sound of the sheep. As we got closer we saw Uncle Paul with a flashlight waving us over. What a night!

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试题回顾

假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将与7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。

（1）比赛的时间、地点；

（2）邀请他的原因；

（3）训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。

注意：

（1）词数不少于100；

（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：

世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition

Dear Chris,

I have good news to tell you.

I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Jin

【思路点拨】

本篇书面要求写一封邀请信。写作的时候要注意以下几点：

一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：

1.代表兴趣小组发出邀请；

2. 介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排；

3. 说明邀请他的原因，包括Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖；

4. 告诉他训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。

二、写作时注意准确运用时态，对于本文来说，以一般将来时为主，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【内容要点】

1. 代表兴趣小组发出邀请；

2. 介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排；

3. 说明邀请他的原因，包括Chris 曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖；

4. 告诉他训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。

【满分范文】

Dear Chris,

I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July. Hearing that you once took part in a Robotics Skills Competition and won an award, I, on behalf of the Robotics Hobby Group, intend to invite you to join our team in the coming competition. I am sure that your involvement will not only help us in winning the award but also enhance the friendship between our two schools.

With this email I also send you our training plan, about which I wish to get your a**ice because you are more experienced than us. We sincerely hope that we can participate in the competition as team partners.

I' m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Jin

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试题回顾

第一节（15分）

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对**文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：

1. 表示欢迎；

2. 推荐他上哪所大学；

3. 建议他做哪些准备工作。

注意：1. 词数不少于50；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

Yours，

Li Hua

【思路点拨】

本文为提纲式作文，文章要求写推荐信，为英国朋友介绍北京的大学。第一可以介绍一下写作背景（Jim对**文化感兴趣，要来**学习），表达欢迎。然后推荐一所大学，并简要介绍推荐的原因（如大学的特色，可以学到什么等）。再次简单介绍应该做哪方面的准备，如可以提前学习汉语，读点有关**传统文化的书，了解**的习俗，让自己更好地适应**的生活。文章可采用一般现在时，人称可以使用第二人称。

【满分范文】

Dear Jim,

I' m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.

Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is, perfect for you where you. can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation some reading in a**ance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.

I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua

试题回顾

第二节（20分）

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你们上周接待外国学生，带领他们体验**茶文化的过程。

注意：词数不少于60。

【思路点拨】

本文为图片介绍类作文，这类作文是根据给出的一幅或几幅图画所提供的信息写短文。此类题的体裁较广泛，可以是记叙文、说明文，也可以是议论文。按照本文的要求可知，是写一篇记叙文。

1. 认真读图，把握中心。

根据提示可知，内容是带领外国学生体验**茶文化的全过程，介绍了茶具，泡茶，沏茶，品茶的过程，所以这是这组图画所要表达的中心。

2.初步构思，考虑用词、短语、句型和时态。

在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容。本文是讲述上周发生的事情，故时态要以过去时为主，人称是第一人称，尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。这是体现自身能力的重要一环。

3. 连词成句，然后再连句成文。

运用适当的单词或短语正确表达各图的意思。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。串连时，要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句，不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象，更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。

4.反复审核，修改错误。

一篇文章写好后，应进行检查，看短文中是否有错，如拼写、用词、时态、语态及表达方面的错误。5.宜详则详，该略则略。对于一些细节方面的内容，如果是文章必不可少的，在写作过程中是不可将其忽略的。如果是可有可无的细节，则可视具体情况进行增删。据此，我们在读图时一定要注意阅读各图中的一些细节内容，看其是否影响文章的内容。

【满分范文】

Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding.

On arriving at the tea house, the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups. I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety, and the exquisite craft**anship of making tea with their interest greatly sparked, I then began to teach them how to make tea.

In order to deliver a clear presentation, I slowly explained the traditional procedure of making tea in detail. Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture and they couldn’t help taking pictures from time to time.

Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves. Washing the tea pots, adding tea leaves, and pouring water into the cups, they followed my instructions and were really immersed in charming tea culture. The tea house witnessed a really enjoyable time for all of us.

At the end of the activity, holding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day. It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value. And I swelled with pride to spread our own culture to people all over the world.

【亮点说明】

巧妙使用定语从句，提升了文章档次：

Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding.

使用非谓语动词，使句子表达更简洁：

On arriving at the tea house…

I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety,

Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture

holding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day.

使用倒装句突出重点。

Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves.

使用it做形式主语，使表达更地道。

It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value.

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试题回顾

书面表达(满分25分)

请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

【写作内容】

1.用约30个词概括上述利用排名( ratings)进行消费的现象；

2.谈谈你如何看待消费排名，然后用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。

【写作要求】

1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3.不必写标题

【评分标准】

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

【思路点拨】

先用30词概括阅读材料，然后针对材料中的话题写一篇议论文谈看法。第一要认真阅读两段有关消费排名现象及观点的纯文字材料，然后进行比较和分析，表明态度，作出价值判断。

文章首段要简要介绍两段材料，第一段材料为一对母子买旅行箱看了网上的评论，结果买回来的旅行箱质量很好。第二段材料为一帮人去餐馆吃饭，看了on-line rating，结果饭菜很不好吃，从而凸显出online rating的不靠谱。

然后写你对online rating的看法，表明观点，注意用2-3个论据来支撑自己的看法。

文章属于议论文，要注意主题句的使用，论点之间要注意有条理。文章可主要采用一般现在时，第三人称来写。

【满分范文】

Possible version one:

As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers.

There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. The a**antages and disa**antages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.

Possible version two:

Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in customers' purchase decision. However, results are sometimes unsatisfactory.

There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable. As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others’ judgment on the product or service concerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others' a**ice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice for some to pay

for good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their sales.

Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.

本文由《向学霸进军》整理编辑于网络

拓展知识：

英语**满分作文

一
假设你叫王明，昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。
英语作文网

Dear David,

I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well.

Hope to see you soon in Beijing.

Yours,

Wang Ming

二
请你根据下面的提纲，以“我的家乡”为题，写一篇100—120字的短文。
提纲：
(1) 家乡的地理位置；
(2) 解放前的情况；
(3) 解放后的变化；
(4) 对家乡的感情。

My Home Town
My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.
But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.
In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.
I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.

三

健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题，你很为他们担忧。请你以此为话题，并结合提示给他们写一封信。

提示：1.要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车；

2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次，或打球、或游泳；

3.饮食要健康；

4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。

要求：1.短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑；

2.80—100词左右；

3.开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Dad(Mum),

You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health. I’m worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn’t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What’s more, it’s necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better.

Dad, please accept my a**ice. I really wish you healthy!

Your loving son (daughter)

Tom (Mary)

四
Dear Dad(Mum),

You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health.I am worried about you. I hope you can keep healthy. You often drive to your office. It is not far.What about walking there because it can make you much stronger?I’d like you to play basketball or go swimming in the gym at least once a week. It is important to eat healthy food such as vegetables, meat, eggs and fruits. Though your work is hard, I still hope that you can go to bed early so that you can get enough sleep.

I’m looking forward to receiving your letter.

Your loving son (daughter)

Tom (Mary)

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随着阳光体育运动在全国开展，**对中学生身体素质有所下降这个问题给予了高度重视，提出了这样的标语：“EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY”。同学们参加了各种体育锻炼之后，校园里出现了可喜的变化，强身健体，增强了学习效果，校园生活丰富了。请你报道一下学校开展这一活动的情况。

注意：1. 词数80—100左右。

2. 要求文章结构合理、内容通顺、句子连贯。

参考词汇：build up one’s body strength 强健身体

reduce diseases 减少疾病

As the Sunny Sports is developing in our country, the government has paid attention to the health of the students and raised, "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY". So far our school life has changed a lot. Now we have more time to do sport in the morning or after school. We play football, basketball, badminton and swim. They let our brains relax and make our school life more colorful. We have become more energetic. Above all our study has all been improved.

Let’s take exercise every day. It can build up our body strength and reduce diseases.

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Doing sport builds up our body strength and reduces diseases.

Though we lead a better life, our health is becoming worse now. So "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY，KEEP ILLNESS AWAY" has been raised by the government.

At noon or after school we play ball games, swimming and running. Look!The playground seems **aller because lots of students are playing on it.The school life has become colorful and we are energetic.As a result we study harder and better.

The Sunny Sports has brought an exciting change to us. Let’s keep on doing it.

七
Career or Family: which is more important?

When asked about their opinion of career and family, people always respond differently. Some people deem it more important to pursue their career, while there are always other people who argue that family should be the number one in one’s life.

It goes without any question that career plays a key role in our life. In the very first place, career can give us an aim to live on. Without career, much of our living time will be certainly wasted. What’s more, career can provide us with a means to live on. Most of the people earn their income from a job. On the other hand, family is also an indispensable part of life, as many people will admit. Family is always regarded as a place where we can escape from troubles in life. In addition, we can obtain a sense of belonging to from family. Without it, anyone will feel lonely and desperate.

In my opinion, career and family are not in opposition to each other. Rather, they can enhance each other so that one’s life can become better and better. Therefore, it’s not a choice between right and wrong, but one between ideal and practical.**公务网 2006-5-28 11:34:59

八
Olympics and I

Dear friend,

I have a great news to inform here. Through long efforts, Beijing has been granted the right to host 2008 Olympic games. As a resident in Beijing, I feel quite excited and like to share with you my happiness.

This success means a lot more than a game to me. In the first place, this Games will definitely promote the development of our economy. According to a recent survey by some experts, this games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. What’s more, our culture will be widely recognized and accepted all over the world through the Games. People will come over from every corner of the world, and experience Chinese culture in every aspect. Besides, through the games, our living environment will be greatly improved. For example, the public transportation system will be up-dated. Moreover, it’s known that more trees will be planted, and grassland will be considerably expanded.

My friend, I really look forward to the coming of this great Games. As an individual, I’m all ready to offer my help in any way I can. I also hope to invite you all to come here, and watch the games in 2008.

Sincerely yours,

九

Touri** in China

Recent years have seen a tendency in China that touri** is growing faster. According to a recent survey made by some experts, about 47% ** residents travel regularly, and 28% rural residents also make their tour across the country. The survey also shows that more people are interested in touri**, and will join the army in the future.

Facing this tendency, we can’t help exploring some underlying factors that are responsible. In the very first place, with the policy of reform and opening up, Chinese people’s living standard has been greatly improved, and therefore, most of them can afford to travel around. What’s more, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude to touri**, and regard it as a life style. In addition, touri** facilities are becoming better and better. For example, transportation develops fast, and many scenic spots are available now.

十

What a disaster(灾难)!So far,it's reported that more than 60,000 people died in the SiChuan earthquake.What's more, millions of people there have become homeless.And they are still in the danger of illness and other difficulties. Anyway, thanks to all the kind people, in and abroad,the situation has been changing well.But we still work hard at it,especially to build houses for those homeless people and cure the injured people.
What can we do now? Besides doing our own job well,we can donate money to them.We firmly believe that with the party and the government's strong leadership, and with the people of all nationalities throughout the country to aid,this earthquake relief will be a victory!

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就是你不会翻译？是需要都帮你翻译出来吗？我给你一个翻译软件好不好，我倒是会翻译，不过我觉得很麻烦。。百度搜“在线翻译”然后把要翻译的**粘贴就可以了。另外，可以下一个“有道词典”这个软件只要鼠标放在上面就有翻译，很好用。。这样可以吗？

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好，明天星期六来弄。

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英语**满分作文

**英语满分作文大全[1]
假设王明昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail，得知David要到北京来学习中文。David想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给David回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出王明建议，以及表达王明帮助David学好中文的愿望。 Dear David, I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well. Hope to see you soon in Beijing. Yours, Wang Ming 二 请根据下面的提纲，以“家乡”为题，写一篇100—120字的短文。 提纲： (1) 家乡的地理位置； (2) 解放前的情况； (3) 解放后的变化； (4) 对家乡的感情。 My Home Town My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life. In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved. I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful. 三 健康对于每个人来说是非常重要的，但父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题，你很为父母担忧。请以此为话题，并结合提示给父母写一封信。 提示：1.要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车； 2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次，或打球、或游泳； 3.饮食要健康； 4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。 要求：1.短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑； 2.80—100词左右； 3.开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Dad(Mum), You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health. I’m worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn’t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What’s more, it’s necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better. Dad, please accept my a**ice. I really wish you healthy! Your loving son (daughter) Tom (Mary) 四 Dear Dad(Mum), You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health.I am worried about you. I hope you can keep healthy. You often drive to your office. It is not far.What about walking there because it can make you much stronger?I’d like you to play basketball or go swimming in the gym at least once a week. It is important to eat healthy food such as vegetables, meat, eggs and fruits. Though your work is hard, I still hope that you can go to bed early so that you can get enough sleep. I’m looking forward to receiving your letter. Your loving son (daughter) Tom .

英语**满分作文

2013四川 某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论学习习惯问题，请你结合自身学习实际，按一下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。
1. 说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系;2. 介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议;3. 描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施
注意：1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. As we all know, good learning habits can make your study go to succeed. As a student, we should pay more attentions to our habits which we develop in our study.
I’m sure “repeat” is a best habit. Do you develop the habit? If we want to improve our study, we should repeat what the teachers taught us again and again, and then we can understand or remember the knowledge which the teachers demand us to master. How to develop the habit? the first step, set a timetable, and stick to carry out the plan, don’t stop.
When I do my homework, I often make mistakes with carelessness, how to overcome the shortage? I think I should think about it over and over as long as I do my homework. And then I do it little by little. Maybe in this way I can correct my mistakes.
2013年全国卷Ⅰ**英语作文题是，开会接机。主要是要求大家用英文把这件事情阐述清楚。下面一起让我们来看看整个的作文要求，同时还为考生提供了一篇优秀的英语作文范文，供广大的考生参考使用。
假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅**画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：李明：高个子，戴** 航班号：CA985 到达：8月6日上午11:30 注意：1. 词数100左右 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3. 开头语和介绍语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.
Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is the first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in a**ance!
His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am. August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in blue jacket.
Looking forward to your reply.
2013年江西卷卷**英语真题中的英语作文题是，你作为一名英语报刊的记者，对一次登山活动进行报道。作文题中已经给出了基本的要求，展现你作文分数高度的就是你对活动的评论了。下面让我们来看看优秀的范文是如何处理这些细节性的东西的。
1. 时间与地点：4月10日，大青山(Daqing Mountain);2. 活动的过程;
3. 你对于这次活动的评论。注意：1. 词数120左右。2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it.
It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Moutain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.
The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time!

英语**满分作文

I hope every day "61" children's day has finally come.
In the morning, I would get out of bed at five thirty. The first step, comb painting makeup, I take a mirror to the left, it's right look in the pretty, he turned and went to school running.
The first program is a grade for the children rehearse for the international children's day song. Clap your hands See **all clas**ate a lively and beautiful, full of spirit and jubilant. They LiangKai throat struggled to sing and spread out his hands tried clap, clap hands all red. The second program is grade six elder brother and sister chorus performances. They lined up in huge team, with the bell LiangKai roostertails singing voice to celebrate "61". Time in singing, laughter and applause, music past. In fast This we play in the fifth grade. We want to use the dance of joy to celebrate "61". Standing on the stage, I don't know that I jump have much good, but I saw the crowd of teachers and students are looking at we laugh, toward us applause. Today I am very happy!

前沿拓展：

英语**满分作文

　　 Olympics and I
　　Dear friend, I have a great news to inform here. Through long efforts, Beijing has been granted the right to host 2008 Olympic games. As a resident in Beijing, I feel quite excited and like to share with you my happiness. This success means a lot more than a game to me. In the first place, this Games will definitely promote the development of our economy. According to a recent survey by some experts, this games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. What‟s more, our culture will be widely recognized and accepted all over the world through the Games. People will come over from every corner of the world, and experience Chinese culture in every aspect. Besides, through the games, our living environment will be greatly improved. For example, the public transportation system will be up-dated. Moreover, it‟s known that more trees will be planted, and grassland will be considerably expanded. My friend, I really look forward to the coming of this great Games. As an individual, I‟m all ready to offer my help in any way I can. I also hope to invite you all to come here, and watch the games in 2008.
　　Sincerely yours,
　　奥运与我
　　亲爱的朋友，我有一个好消息，告知这里。通过长期的努力，北京已获得申办2008年奥运会。作为一个在北京居住，我感到很兴奋，你想分享我的快乐。 这一成功意味着很多超过我的游戏。第一，本届奥运会一定会促进我们的经济发展。据一些专家最近的一项调查，这项比赛将提高约3％的国内生产总值，提供职位约1.0万。更重要的是，我们的文化将得到广泛认可和接受世界各地通过奥运会。人们会走过来从世界的每一个角落，体验中华文化在各个方面。此外， 5 透过游戏，我们的生活环境将大大改善。例如，公共交通系统会过时。此外，据了解，将种植更多树木，草地将大大扩大。 我的朋友，我真的期待着这个伟大的奥运会的到来。作为个人，我都愿意提供我的任何方式我可以提供帮助。我也希望能邀请大家来到这里，观看2008年奥运会，此致。

　　Touri** in China
　　Recent years have seen a tendency in China that touri** is growing faster. According to a recent survey made by some experts, about 47% ** residents travel regularly, and 28% rural residents also make their tour across the country. The survey also shows that more people are interested in touri**, and will join the army in the future. Facing this tendency, we can‟t help exploring some underlying factors that are responsible. In the very first place, with the policy of reform and opening up, Chinese people‟s living standard has been greatly improved, and therefore, most of them can afford to travel around. What‟s more, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude to touri**, and regard it as a life style. In addition, touri** facilities are becoming better and better. For example, transportation develops fast, and many scenic spots are available now.
　　**旅游
　　最近几年，在**的趋势，旅游业增长较快。根据最近的一项调查显示一些专家认为，约47％城镇居民定期作出旅行，28％的农村居民，也使他们的全国巡演。该调查还显示，更多的人在旅游有兴趣，并会在将来加入军队。 面对这一趋势，我们不能不说是负责任的开发一些潜在因素。在第一个地方，随着改革开放政策，对****的生活水平有了很大提高，因此，他们大多数都不能周游。更重要的是，它相信，人们现在更积极的态度，旅游业，把它作为一种生活方式。此外，旅游设施正在变得越来越好。例如，交通运输发展迅速，许多景点都已经上市。
　　
　　What a disaster(灾难)!
　　So far,it's reported that more than 60,000 people died in the SiChuan earthquake.What's more, millions of people there have become homeless.And they are still in the danger of illness and other difficulties. Anyway, thanks to all the kind people, in and abroad,the situation has been changing well.But we still work hard at it,especially to build houses for those homeless people and cure the injured people. What can we do now? Besides doing our own job well,we can donate money to them.We firmly believe that with the party and the government's strong leadership, and with the people of all nationalities throughout the country to aid,this earthquake relief will be a victory!
　　什么是灾难（灾难）！
　　到目前为止，有报道称，超过60,000人在四川earthquake.What的**亡，再加上数百万**有成为homeless.And他们在疾病和其他困难的危险之中。无论如何，感谢所有善良的人们，在国内外形势已经改变well.But我们仍然在努力工作的，特别是为那些无家可归的人建造房屋和医治受伤群众。 现在我们可以做什么？除了做好自己的工作做好，我们可以捐钱给them.We坚信，有**和**的坚强领导，有全国各族**的援助国，这将是一个抗震救灾的胜利！
　　　　
　　The average family income in our Kangming City increased from 8,000 yuan per year in 1998 to 20,000 yuan in 2008. In the meantime, the structure of the average family expenses has changed, too. These graphs show the change clearly. The biggest part of the average family expenses is housing. In 1998, the average family spent 25 percent of its income on housing. In 2880, expenses on housing rose to 42 percent. Food and drink are the second biggest part of the average family expenses. In 1998, about 18% of the average income was spent on this item. In 2008, the figure grew to 30%. As a result of such increase in the expenses on housing and food, expenses on other items have been reduced from 57% in 1998 to 28%in 2008. Thus, a conclusion can be drawn that as income increases, people can improve their living step. But still the average family has to spend a large part of income to meet the basic needs.
　　在我们康明城市家庭平均收入从8000元，每年1998至2008年的20,000元。在此期间，平均家庭支出结构也发生了变化。这些图形显示了明显的变化。 而一般家庭开支的最大部分是住房。 1998年，平均每个家庭花费了其对房屋的收入百分之25。在2880，关于住房支出上升到百分之42。食品和饮料是平均家庭开支第二大的一部分。 1998年，大约18％的平均收入是用于这一项目。 2008年，这一数字增长到30％。由于在费用等增加住房和食物，结果在其他项目的费用已经减少到1998年的57％，至2008年的28％。 因此，可以得出一个结论，随着收入的增加，人们可以改善他们的生活步骤。但仍是一般家庭要花费很大一部分收入，以满足基本需要。

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下面是向学霸进军为进入高三的学生们整理的2020高三最后两个多月冲刺之历年**英语满分作文，以供参考。

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试题回顾

假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去**朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括：

1. 到达时间；

2. 合适的礼物；

3. 餐桌礼仪。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【思路点拨】

本文是一篇电子邮件类应用文写作。餐桌礼仪也是考生比较熟悉的话题。成文时注意以下几点：

一、内容要点要齐全：

1．到达时间；2．合适的礼物；3．餐桌礼仪。

二、时态：

主要用一般现在时和将来时；

三、人称：

第二、三人称。

四、注意使用恰当的高级词汇、短语或句型，以提高作文的水平；

五、适当使用一些连接词和插入语，使文章表达自然、流畅。

1. 浏览信息要点。

2. 三个任务点，第一段内容：问候对方，马上呈现对方所涉及的话题，拜访**家庭，做客时间的要求和忌讳! 第二段内容：做客拜访的合适礼物，可以适当延展，初次拜访，亲密朋友之间拜访，二次拜访，家庭情况适合的礼物，通用的礼物等。第三段：table manners,可以描述两三个通常的**人的餐桌礼节和忌讳的地方，有鲜明特色之处，最后一句表达祝愿。

3. 时态，给对方的建议和说明，用一般现在时，描述风俗礼仪这是客观规律性的东西，用一般现在时。

4. 头脑风暴短语、句型结构，开始打草稿。

5. 行文。

6. 检查拼写和语法。

【满分作文】

Dear Terry,

How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some a**ice.

Firstly, I would 1ike to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. Secondly, if I were you I would bring some appropriate gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. Besides, table manners are also what you should pay attention to. For example, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them on your dish is a **art choice.

If you have any other problems, please don’t hesitate to contact me.

【素材积累】

做客礼仪：

1. 预先约定一个时间以便对方事先作好安排。如果事先已经约定好了时间，就应遵守约定，准时到达，如需提早十分钟二十分钟之内可以接受，不要迟到，以免主人等候，也不要太早到，以免主人未作好准备。这是一个基本礼节问题。

2.如果有专属地域文化特色的礼物是最好的。如果朋友家有长辈，带点烟酒和茶叶或一些老人家用的保健品等；如果朋友家有小孩，带点儿童玩具或买箱牛奶，然后加点茶叶啥的；不要送钟、梨、伞等这些东西，被认为不吉祥。

3.主人会请客人入座上席，再请长辈入座客人旁。入座的时侯要从椅子的左边进入。在中餐结束时，筷子应整齐地放在靠碗右边的桌上，并应等客人们都放下筷子以后，主人示意离席后方可以离开，不能自己吃完了放下筷子就走，这样做是很没礼貌的表现。

常用词语和句子

准时：on time/punctually

餐桌礼仪：table manners

合适的、恰当的：appropriate

拜访：pay a visit to

You are supposed/expected/required to do…

It' s a good idea to…

It' s appropriate/suitable to do …

It' s sensible/reasonable/a**isable to do …

It' s good manners to do …

It' s noteworthy that…

I think it would be more helpful if you could do…

It would be wise of you to…

It' s desirable to do …

It' s inappropriate to do …

It' s impolite to do…

It' s unwise/ina**isable to do …

Never （助动词/系动词/情态动词）主语+谓语动词…

It' s not suitable for you to do…in such a situation.

二

试题回顾

你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together，内容包括：

1. 短片内容：学校的发展；

2. 放映时间、地点；

3. 欢迎对短片提出意见。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【写作点拨】

英语书面通知的时态应该以一般将来时为主，多使用被动语态、简单句。在通知中不应当过度的使用较复杂的词语和读起来拗口的句子。

第二个注意点：层次一定要清晰，一个层次要表达一件事情，使人看起来一目了然。

【满分范文】

Notice

Boys and girls,

May I have your attention, please? Recently, an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus. Welcome to join us end enjoy it! Here are some relevant details about it.

To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing together, which is about the development of our beloved school; as a result, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, it will be in the library from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th . What’s more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.

Hopefully, you would make it to our activity. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.

The Student Union

三

试题回顾

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括：

1. 学校的体育场馆；

2. 主要的运动项目；

3. 你喜欢的项目。

注意：

1. 词数100左右：

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【思路点拨】

本题作文为提纲式作文，形式依然是书信，即给英国朋友Peter介绍学校体育运动情况，属于学校生活话题。这一话题贴合学生生活的实际，学生并不陌生，有话可说。

第一可以介绍学校的体育场馆，场馆的位置，大小，开放时间等等。然后简要介绍学校主要开设的体育项目有哪些，可挑选一到两个做详细介绍，如学生的活动时间，活动形式，以及此类活动的好处等。再次简要分析自己喜欢的体育项目是什么，并简单分析喜欢的原因，自己从中得到的益处等。文章可主要采用一般现在时态，第一人称的方式来写。

【满分范文】

Dear Peter,

I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.

To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I’m intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.

All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.

Yours,

Li Hua

四

试题回顾

第一节 应用文写作

假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：

1. 口语能力：

2. 相关经验；

3. 应聘目的。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【思路点拨】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写应聘信。

第一步：根据提示可知，学校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。要求写封应聘信，内容包括：1.口语能力：2.相关经验；3.应聘目的。

第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组）。

第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有**式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

【范文】

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.

I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. What's more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.

I' m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills. Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

试题回顾

第二节 读后续写（满分25分）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.

We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afermoon. Uncle Paul, my dad's friend, picked us up from the airport and drove me up to his farm in Pecos.

His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.

In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn't going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don't be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don't get lost!" “OK!" my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late aftermoon sunmixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven ( 编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

【思路点拨】

读后续写要求考生第一要读懂已有信息，不仅能读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络。续篇这篇短文时，考生要搞清楚故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置、人物思想情感的变化等。在此基础上，考生要顺着文章的思路，根据线索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用语言表达出来。

通过阅读所给文章可知，父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。

根据第一段所给首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.这一句是故事发展的转折点，可从rabbit出现后带来的反应扩展开，可以写**反应，也可以写人的反应，但要注意与第二段首句相呼应。第二段首句是We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.这一句呼应前文Uncle Paul的叮嘱——不要误吃晚饭，可从如何寻路返回农场去写。

续写时注意要使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后要用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

【满分范文】

Suddenly a lttle rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse turned to the 1eft to avoid the ittle rabbit as I held on tightly and tried not to fall. Then my dad turned around and shouted, Hoid on! All of a sudden the horse began to run My dad tried to keep up behind us. For a few minutes my horse slowed down to a trot and then stopped beside a river. I looked around and realized that we were way off the track.

We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Luckily the stars came out and gave us a little light when we were looking for the way to the farm house. After what must have been several hours, we suddenly heard the sound of sheep in the distance. My dad and I both rode our horses towards the sound of the sheep. As we got closer we saw Uncle Paul with a flashlight waving us over. What a night!

五

试题回顾

假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将与7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。

（1）比赛的时间、地点；

（2）邀请他的原因；

（3）训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。

注意：

（1）词数不少于100；

（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：

世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition

Dear Chris,

I have good news to tell you.

I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Jin

【思路点拨】

本篇书面要求写一封邀请信。写作的时候要注意以下几点：

一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：

1.代表兴趣小组发出邀请；

2. 介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排；

3. 说明邀请他的原因，包括Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖；

4. 告诉他训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。

二、写作时注意准确运用时态，对于本文来说，以一般将来时为主，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【内容要点】

1. 代表兴趣小组发出邀请；

2. 介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排；

3. 说明邀请他的原因，包括Chris 曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖；

4. 告诉他训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。

【满分范文】

Dear Chris,

I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July. Hearing that you once took part in a Robotics Skills Competition and won an award, I, on behalf of the Robotics Hobby Group, intend to invite you to join our team in the coming competition. I am sure that your involvement will not only help us in winning the award but also enhance the friendship between our two schools.

With this email I also send you our training plan, about which I wish to get your a**ice because you are more experienced than us. We sincerely hope that we can participate in the competition as team partners.

I' m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Jin

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试题回顾

第一节（15分）

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对**文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：

1. 表示欢迎；

2. 推荐他上哪所大学；

3. 建议他做哪些准备工作。

注意：1. 词数不少于50；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

Yours，

Li Hua

【思路点拨】

本文为提纲式作文，文章要求写推荐信，为英国朋友介绍北京的大学。第一可以介绍一下写作背景（Jim对**文化感兴趣，要来**学习），表达欢迎。然后推荐一所大学，并简要介绍推荐的原因（如大学的特色，可以学到什么等）。再次简单介绍应该做哪方面的准备，如可以提前学习汉语，读点有关**传统文化的书，了解**的习俗，让自己更好地适应**的生活。文章可采用一般现在时，人称可以使用第二人称。

【满分范文】

Dear Jim,

I' m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.

Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is, perfect for you where you. can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation some reading in a**ance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.

I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua

试题回顾

第二节（20分）

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你们上周接待外国学生，带领他们体验**茶文化的过程。

注意：词数不少于60。

【思路点拨】

本文为图片介绍类作文，这类作文是根据给出的一幅或几幅图画所提供的信息写短文。此类题的体裁较广泛，可以是记叙文、说明文，也可以是议论文。按照本文的要求可知，是写一篇记叙文。

1. 认真读图，把握中心。

根据提示可知，内容是带领外国学生体验**茶文化的全过程，介绍了茶具，泡茶，沏茶，品茶的过程，所以这是这组图画所要表达的中心。

2.初步构思，考虑用词、短语、句型和时态。

在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容。本文是讲述上周发生的事情，故时态要以过去时为主，人称是第一人称，尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。这是体现自身能力的重要一环。

3. 连词成句，然后再连句成文。

运用适当的单词或短语正确表达各图的意思。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。串连时，要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句，不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象，更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。

4.反复审核，修改错误。

一篇文章写好后，应进行检查，看短文中是否有错，如拼写、用词、时态、语态及表达方面的错误。5.宜详则详，该略则略。对于一些细节方面的内容，如果是文章必不可少的，在写作过程中是不可将其忽略的。如果是可有可无的细节，则可视具体情况进行增删。据此，我们在读图时一定要注意阅读各图中的一些细节内容，看其是否影响文章的内容。

【满分范文】

Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding.

On arriving at the tea house, the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups. I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety, and the exquisite craft**anship of making tea with their interest greatly sparked, I then began to teach them how to make tea.

In order to deliver a clear presentation, I slowly explained the traditional procedure of making tea in detail. Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture and they couldn’t help taking pictures from time to time.

Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves. Washing the tea pots, adding tea leaves, and pouring water into the cups, they followed my instructions and were really immersed in charming tea culture. The tea house witnessed a really enjoyable time for all of us.

At the end of the activity, holding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day. It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value. And I swelled with pride to spread our own culture to people all over the world.

【亮点说明】

巧妙使用定语从句，提升了文章档次：

Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding.

使用非谓语动词，使句子表达更简洁：

On arriving at the tea house…

I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety,

Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture

holding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day.

使用倒装句突出重点。

Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves.

使用it做形式主语，使表达更地道。

It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value.

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试题回顾

书面表达(满分25分)

请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

【写作内容】

1.用约30个词概括上述利用排名( ratings)进行消费的现象；

2.谈谈你如何看待消费排名，然后用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。

【写作要求】

1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3.不必写标题

【评分标准】

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

【思路点拨】

先用30词概括阅读材料，然后针对材料中的话题写一篇议论文谈看法。第一要认真阅读两段有关消费排名现象及观点的纯文字材料，然后进行比较和分析，表明态度，作出价值判断。

文章首段要简要介绍两段材料，第一段材料为一对母子买旅行箱看了网上的评论，结果买回来的旅行箱质量很好。第二段材料为一帮人去餐馆吃饭，看了on-line rating，结果饭菜很不好吃，从而凸显出online rating的不靠谱。

然后写你对online rating的看法，表明观点，注意用2-3个论据来支撑自己的看法。

文章属于议论文，要注意主题句的使用，论点之间要注意有条理。文章可主要采用一般现在时，第三人称来写。

【满分范文】

Possible version one:

As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers.

There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. The a**antages and disa**antages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.

Possible version two:

Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in customers' purchase decision. However, results are sometimes unsatisfactory.

There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable. As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others’ judgment on the product or service concerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others' a**ice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice for some to pay

for good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their sales.

Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.

本文由《向学霸进军》整理编辑于网络

拓展知识：

英语**满分作文

一
假设你叫王明，昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。
英语作文网

Dear David,

I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well.

Hope to see you soon in Beijing.

Yours,

Wang Ming

二
请你根据下面的提纲，以“我的家乡”为题，写一篇100—120字的短文。
提纲：
(1) 家乡的地理位置；
(2) 解放前的情况；
(3) 解放后的变化；
(4) 对家乡的感情。

My Home Town
My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.
But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.
In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.
I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.

三

健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题，你很为他们担忧。请你以此为话题，并结合提示给他们写一封信。

提示：1.要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车；

2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次，或打球、或游泳；

3.饮食要健康；

4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。

要求：1.短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑；

2.80—100词左右；

3.开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Dad(Mum),

You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health. I’m worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn’t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What’s more, it’s necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better.

Dad, please accept my a**ice. I really wish you healthy!

Your loving son (daughter)

Tom (Mary)

四
Dear Dad(Mum),

You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health.I am worried about you. I hope you can keep healthy. You often drive to your office. It is not far.What about walking there because it can make you much stronger?I’d like you to play basketball or go swimming in the gym at least once a week. It is important to eat healthy food such as vegetables, meat, eggs and fruits. Though your work is hard, I still hope that you can go to bed early so that you can get enough sleep.

I’m looking forward to receiving your letter.

Your loving son (daughter)

Tom (Mary)

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随着阳光体育运动在全国开展，**对中学生身体素质有所下降这个问题给予了高度重视，提出了这样的标语：“EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY”。同学们参加了各种体育锻炼之后，校园里出现了可喜的变化，强身健体，增强了学习效果，校园生活丰富了。请你报道一下学校开展这一活动的情况。

注意：1. 词数80—100左右。

2. 要求文章结构合理、内容通顺、句子连贯。

参考词汇：build up one’s body strength 强健身体

reduce diseases 减少疾病

As the Sunny Sports is developing in our country, the government has paid attention to the health of the students and raised, "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY". So far our school life has changed a lot. Now we have more time to do sport in the morning or after school. We play football, basketball, badminton and swim. They let our brains relax and make our school life more colorful. We have become more energetic. Above all our study has all been improved.

Let’s take exercise every day. It can build up our body strength and reduce diseases.

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Doing sport builds up our body strength and reduces diseases.

Though we lead a better life, our health is becoming worse now. So "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY，KEEP ILLNESS AWAY" has been raised by the government.

At noon or after school we play ball games, swimming and running. Look!The playground seems **aller because lots of students are playing on it.The school life has become colorful and we are energetic.As a result we study harder and better.

The Sunny Sports has brought an exciting change to us. Let’s keep on doing it.

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Career or Family: which is more important?

When asked about their opinion of career and family, people always respond differently. Some people deem it more important to pursue their career, while there are always other people who argue that family should be the number one in one’s life.

It goes without any question that career plays a key role in our life. In the very first place, career can give us an aim to live on. Without career, much of our living time will be certainly wasted. What’s more, career can provide us with a means to live on. Most of the people earn their income from a job. On the other hand, family is also an indispensable part of life, as many people will admit. Family is always regarded as a place where we can escape from troubles in life. In addition, we can obtain a sense of belonging to from family. Without it, anyone will feel lonely and desperate.

In my opinion, career and family are not in opposition to each other. Rather, they can enhance each other so that one’s life can become better and better. Therefore, it’s not a choice between right and wrong, but one between ideal and practical.**公务网 2006-5-28 11:34:59

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Olympics and I

Dear friend,

I have a great news to inform here. Through long efforts, Beijing has been granted the right to host 2008 Olympic games. As a resident in Beijing, I feel quite excited and like to share with you my happiness.

This success means a lot more than a game to me. In the first place, this Games will definitely promote the development of our economy. According to a recent survey by some experts, this games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. What’s more, our culture will be widely recognized and accepted all over the world through the Games. People will come over from every corner of the world, and experience Chinese culture in every aspect. Besides, through the games, our living environment will be greatly improved. For example, the public transportation system will be up-dated. Moreover, it’s known that more trees will be planted, and grassland will be considerably expanded.

My friend, I really look forward to the coming of this great Games. As an individual, I’m all ready to offer my help in any way I can. I also hope to invite you all to come here, and watch the games in 2008.

Sincerely yours,

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Touri** in China

Recent years have seen a tendency in China that touri** is growing faster. According to a recent survey made by some experts, about 47% ** residents travel regularly, and 28% rural residents also make their tour across the country. The survey also shows that more people are interested in touri**, and will join the army in the future.

Facing this tendency, we can’t help exploring some underlying factors that are responsible. In the very first place, with the policy of reform and opening up, Chinese people’s living standard has been greatly improved, and therefore, most of them can afford to travel around. What’s more, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude to touri**, and regard it as a life style. In addition, touri** facilities are becoming better and better. For example, transportation develops fast, and many scenic spots are available now.

十

What a disaster(灾难)!So far,it's reported that more than 60,000 people died in the SiChuan earthquake.What's more, millions of people there have become homeless.And they are still in the danger of illness and other difficulties. Anyway, thanks to all the kind people, in and abroad,the situation has been changing well.But we still work hard at it,especially to build houses for those homeless people and cure the injured people.
What can we do now? Besides doing our own job well,we can donate money to them.We firmly believe that with the party and the government's strong leadership, and with the people of all nationalities throughout the country to aid,this earthquake relief will be a victory!

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就是你不会翻译？是需要都帮你翻译出来吗？我给你一个翻译软件好不好，我倒是会翻译，不过我觉得很麻烦。。百度搜“在线翻译”然后把要翻译的**粘贴就可以了。另外，可以下一个“有道词典”这个软件只要鼠标放在上面就有翻译，很好用。。这样可以吗？

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好，明天星期六来弄。

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英语**满分作文

**英语满分作文大全[1]
假设王明昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail，得知David要到北京来学习中文。David想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给David回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出王明建议，以及表达王明帮助David学好中文的愿望。 Dear David, I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well. Hope to see you soon in Beijing. Yours, Wang Ming 二 请根据下面的提纲，以“家乡”为题，写一篇100—120字的短文。 提纲： (1) 家乡的地理位置； (2) 解放前的情况； (3) 解放后的变化； (4) 对家乡的感情。 My Home Town My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life. In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved. I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful. 三 健康对于每个人来说是非常重要的，但父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题，你很为父母担忧。请以此为话题，并结合提示给父母写一封信。 提示：1.要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车； 2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次，或打球、或游泳； 3.饮食要健康； 4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。 要求：1.短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑； 2.80—100词左右； 3.开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Dad(Mum), You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health. I’m worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn’t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What’s more, it’s necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better. Dad, please accept my a**ice. I really wish you healthy! Your loving son (daughter) Tom (Mary) 四 Dear Dad(Mum), You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health.I am worried about you. I hope you can keep healthy. You often drive to your office. It is not far.What about walking there because it can make you much stronger?I’d like you to play basketball or go swimming in the gym at least once a week. It is important to eat healthy food such as vegetables, meat, eggs and fruits. Though your work is hard, I still hope that you can go to bed early so that you can get enough sleep. I’m looking forward to receiving your letter. Your loving son (daughter) Tom .

英语**满分作文

2013四川 某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论学习习惯问题，请你结合自身学习实际，按一下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。
1. 说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系;2. 介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议;3. 描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施
注意：1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. As we all know, good learning habits can make your study go to succeed. As a student, we should pay more attentions to our habits which we develop in our study.
I’m sure “repeat” is a best habit. Do you develop the habit? If we want to improve our study, we should repeat what the teachers taught us again and again, and then we can understand or remember the knowledge which the teachers demand us to master. How to develop the habit? the first step, set a timetable, and stick to carry out the plan, don’t stop.
When I do my homework, I often make mistakes with carelessness, how to overcome the shortage? I think I should think about it over and over as long as I do my homework. And then I do it little by little. Maybe in this way I can correct my mistakes.
2013年全国卷Ⅰ**英语作文题是，开会接机。主要是要求大家用英文把这件事情阐述清楚。下面一起让我们来看看整个的作文要求，同时还为考生提供了一篇优秀的英语作文范文，供广大的考生参考使用。
假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅**画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：李明：高个子，戴** 航班号：CA985 到达：8月6日上午11:30 注意：1. 词数100左右 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3. 开头语和介绍语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.
Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is the first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in a**ance!
His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am. August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in blue jacket.
Looking forward to your reply.
2013年江西卷卷**英语真题中的英语作文题是，你作为一名英语报刊的记者，对一次登山活动进行报道。作文题中已经给出了基本的要求，展现你作文分数高度的就是你对活动的评论了。下面让我们来看看优秀的范文是如何处理这些细节性的东西的。
1. 时间与地点：4月10日，大青山(Daqing Mountain);2. 活动的过程;
3. 你对于这次活动的评论。注意：1. 词数120左右。2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it.
It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Moutain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.
The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time!

英语**满分作文

I hope every day "61" children's day has finally come.
In the morning, I would get out of bed at five thirty. The first step, comb painting makeup, I take a mirror to the left, it's right look in the pretty, he turned and went to school running.
The first program is a grade for the children rehearse for the international children's day song. Clap your hands See **all clas**ate a lively and beautiful, full of spirit and jubilant. They LiangKai throat struggled to sing and spread out his hands tried clap, clap hands all red. The second program is grade six elder brother and sister chorus performances. They lined up in huge team, with the bell LiangKai roostertails singing voice to celebrate "61". Time in singing, laughter and applause, music past. In fast This we play in the fifth grade. We want to use the dance of joy to celebrate "61". Standing on the stage, I don't know that I jump have much good, but I saw the crowd of teachers and students are looking at we laugh, toward us applause. Today I am very happy!